Needs constructive criticism .

So i recently made this birthday vid for my friend B331000 .
One of the vids that i ..insanely made .

Constructive criticism is highly appreciated .

..please D;

Wow! This is really good! I don't think I've ever seen you make a video like this. Um... constructed critisism.....
The sqaure enix logo is a bit random, unless you wanted it to look that way. ^^
When the words appear, "when I hit the floor." I think that's what it was- they flash by just a little too quickly to be able to read them. I'd slow it down just a tiny bit. That's really all! It was a great video! Doesn't need much work at all. ^^

well, i rarely make vids as 'fast' as this, actually xD i do, have made a few fast videos .. but yeah, it's just not as fast as this xD

oh okay . At first i thought it was gonna be pretty ..cool if i added their logo, but lol yeah its kinda random too xD

When the words appear, "when I hit the floor." I think that's what it was- they flash by just a little too quickly to be able to read them. I'd slow it down just a tiny bit.

now that you mention that .. i can't even read the "floor" myself XD
lol thank u so much for the critique, i'd keep that in mind